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Thursday, 12 June 2014

100 word challenge

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One day there was three boys named Jack and there names were named Jack because they were twins and they liked to eat sweets and there best sweet was chocolate. After a good night sleep they went to school and they went on a trip to a land named egg land and
they had so much fun like more fun and they ate eggs and they had eaten over 9000
eggs and they still wanted to eat more. After they had found the biggest egg in the world but it was cracked so they put on some safety jackets to see if it is OK to eat. After they saw a huge wave but it was not water it was chocolate so they ran back to the bus and went back to school. After they all ate lots of eggs and chocolate.

1 comment:

  1. Hi James,
    I really like 100 Word Challenge keep the good writing up just make sure you do full stops closer to each other.

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