In the morning we had a trip to the icy mountain with my friend David and it was so so COLD!!! It was so cold and I was freezing to death. My body was full with ice.
When I had got there I had no where to build a house it was hard to find a place to build my house. So first I went with David in the forest and looked out for wood . After a while David got lost so I went and looked for him but I saw no one . The forest smelt like red cold blood.
When I was going to find wood I heard a weird noise, BANG BANG and I saw it was a bulldog so I ran as fast as I can. It was like I was playing rugby with a dog, “GET AWAY.” The dog was huge like a dinosaur.
Then I grabbed a stick and threw it on the side so that the dog can chase it and not chase me. After that I saw waves POUNDING down like a earthquake so I kept on running. In one hour it had stopped and I was so happy because I felt like I was going to die but I was feeling a little sad.
When the dog ran to get the stick I saw a car driving through me and once he saw me he was David so I hopped in the car and we gassed it like a cat.
Hey James,
ReplyDeleteThe story you wrote was very interesting to read. I was really wanting to know what happened to David. What did happen to David? Did he die or did he survive?
Keep up the Great writing,
From Lyle
Hi James,
ReplyDeleteI like the story because it's interesting. What inspired you to write the story about the Huge Bulldog? Why did the forest smell like red cold blood?
Hi James,
ReplyDeleteI really like your story because it inspire me. Was it hard to find David?
Keep up the incredible work.
From Alaskah.