HOMEWORK CHALLENGE!!!

Hi guys this is me and Denzal's homework that we had made for our homework challenge. HOPE YOU LIKE IT!!!!

AMAZING CUT AND PASTE by James

                                                   AMAZING cut and paste by James!!!   

Hi guys this is my amazing cut and paste. by this strategy it was kind of hard but a manage to finish and talk through my goal YES!!!

SPACE inventers

Hi everyone, this is my Space DLO. We have been learning about space this whole week. My class and I was learning how the earth is spherical. Also learning about space investigators like Ptolemy, Alhazen, Copernicus and Galileo. Hope to see you next time.

My ANZAC thinglink.

ANZAC REFLECTION

What:

I had been learning all about world war 1 and how they started and what was it like there. They also had hard times there sometimes they will think of there family and friends. They would be living at Gallipoli.

So what:  They had been thinking of their families because they will always be home sick and not feeling well about staying there. Because it is different to be living here than there.

Now what: I can also carry on this information that I learnt today onto friends and families that don’t know about world war 1, ANZAC DAY!!!

WHAT I LEARNT TODAY!!!!

What?
Today I learnt to write compound and complex sentences.


So what?
I also learnt to use Conjunction In a sentence like,

for example:


Now what?

Now that I know how to write a complex sentences and conjunction I can use it in my writing plan and while I am writing. 

HOW TO SURVIVE YOUR FIRST NIGHT IN MINECRAFT

Mine craft is one of the most popular games in the world. Have you ever played mine craft? Oh that's alright because today I will talk to you about how to survive on your first night of survival on mine craft.

Firstly, Gather wood. Why Gather wood? You need to make a crafting table. You can also use your hands for most of the tasks in mine craft. Also it might take a bit long to get everything ready. 

Secondly, keep away from the mops. After that hold onto what you are doing and do as we say. Also remember to have light in darkness. 

Thirdly, Go and collect resources, food, cows or pigs. Also Mine cobblestone furnace later. Make your windows with sand. After that remind yourself to keep away from the mops.

 Finally, that is how you survive on your first night of survival. Also keep this so you can survive on your first night of survival. 

In Week 6 of Term 1 our class focussed on how to write great explanations. We wrote about how to survive your first night in Minecraft (the game a lot of us are obsessed with!). 
Here is my writing, after I have self-assessed and peer-assessed my work.

Signs of Success!	Self	Peer
Introduction - briefly tells the reader what the explanation is about
Present tense
Formal Language; Technical Language
Time connectives
Sequenced and paragraphed (paragraphs have 1 main idea!)
Ambitious vocabulary (adjectives; verbs)
Summary - may have an interesting fact or comment about playing the game