I was a Year 6 student at Hay Park School in Auckland, NZ. I was in McCahon Class and my teacher was Mrs Kingston. This was where I shared my learning.
Our class had a blog and you can visit it by clicking here.
This term we are going to be writing all sorts of different texts. Here is my sentence recount about my AMAZING holiday going to the movies and watching phenomenal movies at the cinemas. It was so so FUN!!!
Bonjour James, I can see that you enjoyed your holidays from this amazing blog post about going to the movies to watch Jurassic park! I'm not sure you we're supposed to leave the sentence 1, 2,3,4 in? Awesome features and I liked the way you used descriptive language in sentence 4, like phenomenal! I think you missed something, it was who did you go with? I already know you went with your sister!
Bonjour James,
ReplyDeleteI can see that you enjoyed your holidays from this amazing blog post about going to the movies to watch Jurassic park! I'm not sure you we're supposed to leave the sentence 1, 2,3,4 in? Awesome features and I liked the way you used descriptive language in sentence 4, like phenomenal! I think you missed something, it was who did you go with? I already know you went with your sister!
Thanks Ashlyn